David, several issues concerning the conversation with the Oracle:
1) when he says "in the computer at the command bridge...", response #1 is "Uderstood"
2) Another thread he uses the word "thelepatic" instead of telepathic.
3) He says "...I felt a mysterious energy that sent many systems into malfunctioning", should be ...that caused many systems to malfunction."
4) A descriptor about an action of the Oracle says "The Oracle makes gestures and rays of light pass over of your scrolls and gear". "of" should be omitted.
5) Another action descriptor says (Rays of light ~shine~ upon your eyes ~and~ make you see images and words...). ~ words should be inserted for sentence to make more sense.
6) When asking the Oracle about the spiders and wizards he says ...they have "overriden" instead of overridden.
Hope this helps.